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Rebecca Holden's avatar

This post is wonderful, Nicci. I read the poem first, which I enjoyed, and then I went back to listen to the voiceover. Such a goosepimpling combination.

I don't know much about poetry, but the 'scale', for want of a better word, of this part of the poem is terrific; because of its length I found it pulling me relentlessly towards the conclusion:

'To cradle so tenderly a

box marked on all sides in

orange stickers advertising to the world

what’s inside....'

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Nicci Kadilak's avatar

Thanks, Rebecca. 🙏🏼

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<Mary L. Tabor>'s avatar

Nicci, I am a deep reader of poetry and I've studied prosody and published one poem on short-edition.com though I don't usually write poetry. I love this poem, its lyrical lilt, its imagery and the turn at the end that I would have loved even without the explanation. Go girl!

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Nicci Kadilak's avatar

Thanks, Mary 💖

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Bethany Bell's avatar

We write to release, we share it because we know, on the soul level, someone, somewhere, at some point in their life, needs to hear exactly what you said.

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Nicci Kadilak's avatar

Thank you. It definitely needed to come out. 🙏🏼💖

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Michael Spencer's avatar

I adore voiceovers with poetry, maybe it's because it's just more personal.

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Nicci Kadilak's avatar

Thanks. I like them too, and I think I’ll keep doing them for some of my posts.

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Reena Kapoor's avatar

Loved it Nicci! This is beautiful. And the explanation helped.

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Nicci Kadilak's avatar

Thank you! 💖

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David's avatar

lovely work

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Nicci Kadilak's avatar

Thank you!

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Nicci Kadilak's avatar

Thank you. 💖😭

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Nicci Kadilak's avatar

Can’t stop won’t stop

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